Prologue: 14 - February 5th, 2013, 5:00 pm
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[Posted by fightbeast on February 3rd, 2013, 4:32 am]

Lomax, how can you hate on such a beautiful view...??



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[Posted by The Orange Cow on February 5th, 2013, 7:27 pm]

Stop beating around the bush! Show us what's in the box! You know you want to! Also, start enjoying the beautiful view!



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[Posted by kajov on February 6th, 2013, 2:07 am]

HTHE COLOURS~~ And the second panel it's perfect?? Looking so good you are so good *_* Also the way Lomax' pants crinkle in the last panel hhfff

The transition between the first and second panel could work better though? Of course when I look at the previous page and this page, I get the idea where he goes, but it might flow a bit better if the direction/angle between them was a bit more, uhh, consistent? (Difficult to explain in English oops) Not very helpful with this page anymore, but yeah



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[Posted by madalice on February 13th, 2013, 3:21 am]

Very nice job with the first panel in this one, he's such a cutie. Looking at your coloring is like eating candy :^)



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[Posted by sissyclub (Guest) on March 20th, 2013, 7:32 pm]

your tones are fucking fantastic.
i guess this might be a little insulting, but you could look at your lines and dismiss the style as somewhat generic (because of the manga influence i guess) - but stylistically you are the best i've seen at what you do.
and your skill for atmosphere and tone is really effective and skillful.


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